Duskitten's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maid Skye 2: Dust Bunny Wars]

gun

[Small s****y wings]

I wanna squeesh their arms, they're so pudgy

Sony-Shock responds:

I know, right? I looked at babies arms as reference!They have the most adorable pudgy arms.

I ended dismissing the refs for the most part, but I did give them a look 'v'

[Avy Anne (Pun intended)]

Noice birb, I think the only thing is, I cant read what's on the shirt, I think it says "Stabby" but the contrast/lack of spacing makes it hard to read.

DoomCogs responds:

yeah couldve certaintly done better, but yeah it is meant to say stabby lmfao

[Treespeaker]

I love the sketchy nature of this, I think perhaps the only thing that could possibly be improved is just general consistency in anatomy, but otherwise, I think it looks pretty awesome and I love the choices of color!

[Divine Intervention]

It's good, though i feel like if you used the extra frame you have that you used on the TP, to help the cloth on the body/shadows move more, it could be a lot better.

olbengc responds:

Thanks for the feedback.
I totally agree. this is one of the first pixel animations i did, so i made a couple of mistakes that i've learnt from since. In hindsight 2 frames were really not enough to animate the clothing/light in this instance. also i should've animated some other parts that remain static here.