Duskitten's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Less Is More]

I think it's a fun little concept,
I think if I were to improve upon a few things they would be these:
1. Collisions, the current ones are extremely...imprecise and that makes it a bit frustrating to judge stuff
2. I think the actual growing of the square could be centered, this way, there's a better perspective on how you're growing, rather than growing towards one side
3. I think the art could honestly be more simple, just black/white, with simple outlines for things, and that would really make the game pop more visually

Otherwise, a great proof of concept for a beginner game, keep it up!

noodlstudios responds:

Thanks for your feedback. Despite the art being simple, I tried to go for a tropical vibe, but maybe outlines would make it look nicer.

[0 Dimensions Color Game]

I think that this is....odd...to say the least, I think that the color of the pixel is too dull, cause I couldn't even see the pixel to begin with when the game started, and there's no queues for when the previous iteration is done (leading to un-intended presses/lack of presses that end the game), I think maybe having it change back to grey, or flip to white would help differentiate when a sequence is done (if there even is one? I cant tell)

ARLTB responds:

Thanks. Maybe the pixel is too small. You can try zooming in by tapping the up arrow

[Dumby's Character Creator beta 0.3 - music update]

Im unsure if these assets are original, but I highly recommend crediting the people who made the music/background art/ect
Second, I recommend that you fix the hat layer, as it's behind the character's head currently, and doesn't function properly
Other than that, It seems pretty solid in terms of a creation system, maybe put a tad bit more effort into it though

DumbyBoii responds:

I have taken note of your reply.i forgot to say that this is in beta.and yes I made those assets in flipaclip.

[Dalila]

It definitely could use some work, I think the biggest thing that should be worked on is probably coherency of the art itself, as currently, it feels rather disjointed between clashing art styles, Otherwise, I think the game itself handles pretty well, I think maybe a tutorial helping explain the controls inside the game itself would be nice. Otherwise, I wish you the best on your project!

ochiogrande responds:

Thank you for your , comment is very helpfull. Il do some more work on grafix, and try to put more life in it.

[Riddle Kindergarten Test Demo]

I think that this could use quite a bit more polish, as I'm not even sure what exactly happened, and the buttons I don't think are working as intended, perhaps I'd take a look into studying more of how Riddle school visually looks, and try to mimic that, as the cinematic portions look spot on, but the management of the characters, and their animations look a bit subpar in quality.

Sillypilly responds:

im actually apologise right now, and yes i will polish everything, but!,i will tell what the plot was,

PLOT: this game is taking place before the events of Riddle School/Riddle Transfer, phil eggtree who is a student at riddle kindergarten is the least bored student at the kindergarten, after his teacher left, he decided to escape and got introduced to his friends (and yes this is an origin game of how phil and his friends met each other), he got introduced to phred, an lazy and bored student for an Military class, and Smiley, an Joyful Student who likes learning, and Zack, an Student who gets abused and freezed alot, will Phil and his Friends will save the school and the world?, Lets find out!,

AFTER MESSAGE: well i know what you thinking, this is plot is suitable for this?, no... thats a plot of the final game, as for the characters idle animations, haven't you see the characters idie animations?, yes this an inspiration to the classic flash game Pico School and the characters animation,

- Sillypilly

[Sneaky Bay]

I'm not sure if my game is just glitched, or if you're just trying pull something to get people to go to your website/walk-through but I couldn't find any way to open the box on the beach beyond just going onto the ad-ridden site that is your website, and find your youtube channel, just to look at the walk-through, or go through trial and error for a while.

selfdefiant responds:

Every solution is in the game. Look harder! Don't give up so easily.

[Firestarter]

The only reason I'm not doing a full 5 is it's easy to just spam click everything and burn a ton of stuff down without effort.

SilverwareGames responds:

If you spam you'll burn everything and that's game over. We are changing the game over screen to be a bit more clear about that.

[Underworld]

First thing I notice, very enlarged cluttered main menu screen, I would back it up a bit, second, a mixing of pixel sizes, to make a better coherent game, I'd recommend not doing that. You also accidentally left what I believe are developer controls (Arrow keys), and the hit system is far too inaccurate for a game of this style, as you just end up getting launched and die. There's some nice aesthetic on some levels, however I feel this game could be a lot better if it was polished some more.

Edit: By in terms of the hit system, i mean player > enemy collisions, you can hardly move past them without them hitting you, and they move fast enough that you get stuck between them and die, and there's a bullet system?

Skolas3654 responds:

Thank you for the criticism, the control text is only for the first level though.

May I ask you to clarify with inaccurate hit system, because if you're talking about the gravity of the bullet then thats supposed to be in there.

You could call this game an experimental project to a different system then what I would usually focus on.

[B E A N S]

It's a thing that's for sure. I feel there's a massive lack of content for what could be a good meme, however, due to the lack of noises, and lack of proper pixel sizes, that's gonna bean a no from me.

Skolas3654 responds:

This game was made as a bet, its not meant to be a serious content filled game.

[Baldi Character Maker]

It's a thing I guess, very sloppy though.

BlazingStudios responds:

I agree